Splendid tune 🎶 and I like your style and singing

Enjoyed this!

Sounds very good, great song.

Beautiful voice, yes bring up the music a bit.

Beautiful song. Very well written. I think the reason people find the music low is that you have hard pan'ed instruments extreme left and right. I personally prefer a softer panning. Watch out for Garageband which can only pan by turning down left or right. Ie if you have a stereo software instruments, you loose a lot of information when you hard pan. In Logic Pro you can change the mode to Stereo pan where a bit of the left signal is fed to right when you pan right. Garageband is a bit limited with many features

You have a perfect contralto tone to your voice!!

Love your vocals. Perfect for my ears !! :)

yep this works-I think you have way more talent than you believe you have you just heed a good producer

You have a good sense for rock/pop music structure. I like this one a lot. I just want to hear you belt out those vocals at full volume, but I understand the kinds of limitations that exist for home studio musicians... where I live it's impossible to record clean vocals, so everything I make is instrumental. ;) Very cool song.

Great!