Wonderful! :)

A lovely eclogue with some nice melodic shapes. That low C# in the Oboe, marked p, is going to earn you a stink eye from the Oboist. It would sound much nicer played by an English Horn. I found some of the key changes a little odd and forced, perhaps, although, true to be told, I do that myself at times. Overall, it's a lovely start; I'd like to hear much more transparent orchestration; there's a lot of thickness and doubling in this music (which is meant to be delicate). Just my two cents. Keep working on it!

Lovely melodic shape. Some work on cadence use to differentiate and set up the AB transition. I do like the orchestration. Lovely. Well done

It's been a long time since we did not hear that kind of piece here. Wonderful orchestration and lovely theme.

Beautiful melody line. I really like a good melody as you may know now. Lovely orchestration.

Enjoyed.

Mellow, soulful a lovely appreciation of life.