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See Me Fly
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Still work in progress. Feedback appreciated. I wanted to call it Three Notes but decided on See Me Fly. It's about people who belittle your accomplishments and celebrate your failures. Most of the time they are people who are close. I wanted to keep it all laid back but I could not deny the metal head in me.
Released: 25-May-2024
Category: Rock
Application: GarageBand
File type: mp3
File size: 11.0 Mb
Plays: 19
Downloads: 0
Weekly plays: 1
Weekly downloads: 0
License: Commerical derivatives allowed; contact artist for permission
Lyrics
Out on the road
Somewhere all alone
I carry my load

I had a dream
I was flying through the air
You should have seen
I did not have a care

I was flying high
Way up in the sky
People looked up at me
Pretending not to see

Out on the road
Somewhere all alone
I carry my load

I came crashing down
Right down to the ground
People stood and stared
But no one really cared

Out on the road
Somewhere all alone
I carry my load

I just want to run and hide

In my dream 
People were so obscene
Some people I knew
People I looked up to
I don’t know why
They didn’t want to see me fly

Out on the road
Somewhere all alone
I carry my load
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deezee
artist
Wow the backing music and that guitar riff sounds great. Love the lyrics, vocals. love the way it sounds so laid back. Fav
7 months ago
Sprout
artist
Amazing hauntingly stunning song, loved that piano followed by the awesome guitar riff with great vocals !! ....
Latest song: UPlift
7 months ago
Wyndsok
artist
@TrebleFace 
I've only flown like that in some dreams. I usually get too high...get nervous...and start to fall!
Interesting concept. Cool sounds...
:-)
Latest song: This Desert Place
7 months ago
TrebleFace
artist
Thanks @deezee and @Sprout.  Still work in progress 😏 thanks @Wyndsok and what kind of high are you talking about 😳
7 months ago
StanTheManLoh
artist
Keep going! Keep at it! You'll get what you want very soon!
7 months ago
KennethLavrsen
artist
Cool song. Great progress on both song structure and rhythm.
7 months ago
Grathy
artist
Your voice reminds me of John Lennon a bit here… It's an interesting piece, I look forward to hearing how it develops.
7 months ago
Daugrin
artist
Not to be mean but 
Okay, here are specific suggestions, which might help. I would normally make these privately but I think you can handle this, and it will benefit lots of people who post here whose music doesn't get listens for obvious reasons. 
Put a pitch correction plugin on the vocals and the guitars.  Pitch challenge is not cool, fun or listenable. It's an easy fix once you've proficient with the tool. 
The reverb on the tune needs to be tuned and equalized.  I know, what? 
There is nothing in a reverb plugin worth listening to below 80h.  It just makes a cluttered mess.  Get rid of everything in the reverb you don't like with an equation tool.  Something to try?  Pan the vocal right and put the vocal reverb hard left then mix until they sound smooth.  
Buss the vocals and add a high pass filter.  It may help to add a saturation plugin to create more signal.  Add a few db of this high to the vocals and they will become easier to hear, when they "pop" out of the background stop adding. 
Again,  keep working!  Everyone grows, yer already much improved! 
Latest song: Skate on By
7 months ago
TrebleFace
artist
 Hello @Daugrin thanks for the listen.  I'm here for feedback and suggestions because I need them.  I was also talking to @Wyndsok and he suggsted much of what you said.  I gotta learn and experiment all that you mentioned.  Thank you very much.
6 months ago
Telemetry
artist
Tripping out. :)
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6 months ago
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